FROM: John
TO: Bill
SENT: 3 April 2008 12:00
SUBJECT: Urgent: Monday task List
Dear Bill
Confirmation of the task list on Monday
I am very pleased to send you the task list to be accomplished early:
* The next meeting with the sales rep, will be the next weekend on 9th April at 10 o’clock, in the conference room; This conference is very important.
* I’m really happy with my new assistant Ms. Anderson; she is very efficient and responsible in their work. You know…she has helped me a lot
* I would like to obtain a bonus for these people of my team, which are more efficient and punctual in their work during the month; the bonus could be a motivation to work better, don’t you think?
Anything else you want, you can send me an e-mail, ok?
Yours sincerely
JOHN
1 comentario:
pleased in I’ll - pleased to send you
These conference - this conference
bonus these - a bonus for these
Good email, Veronica. You are correctly using semi-colons too!
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