Miguel Hidalgo Avenue s/n
Col Narvarte, México D.F.
Tel: 00 31 20 98 74 63
Col Narvarte, México D.F.
Tel: 00 31 20 98 74 63
Sara Martinez
El Universal Journal
912 North Avenue
Miami, WC1 4AT
Tel: 00 31 20 98 74 63
El Universal Journal
912 North Avenue
Miami, WC1 4AT
Tel: 00 31 20 98 74 63
June 26th. 2007
Dear Ms. Martinez:
We disagree with selling the Hershey´s company, because that company is closely linked with the people and tourists who visit the town, they like to visit because of the "magic" created by its image as "Chocolate City" Besides, Milton Hershey would never have sold; he loved the relationship that Hershey's company had with the people and the acceptance that he gave to the company. We hope that an advertisement appears not to sell Hershey's, as a call made by the people.
We disagree with selling the Hershey´s company, because that company is closely linked with the people and tourists who visit the town, they like to visit because of the "magic" created by its image as "Chocolate City" Besides, Milton Hershey would never have sold; he loved the relationship that Hershey's company had with the people and the acceptance that he gave to the company. We hope that an advertisement appears not to sell Hershey's, as a call made by the people.
Once again, I appreciate the time to put the advertisement in your newspaper; Also congratulations on your great work being done in the local newspaper.
Yours sincerely
Verónica Rendon
Resident of the Hershey´s town
Yours sincerely
Verónica Rendon
Resident of the Hershey´s town
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June 26th. 2007 - June 26, 2007
company's Hershey - Herchey company
who visit the city, they -
city. They
his image - its
City"- You need a period here.
sold, he loved - Here, instead of a comma, you need a semi-colon.
that had Hershey's company - that Hershey's company had
We hope so - change "so" to "that"
Good letter, Veronica!
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